A Females Path

I have seen a crooked path
I have seen paths that lead in circles
I have seen paths that split into two
I have also seen the best path of them all, the straight one
Nothing is better than seeing a young girl grow mature and become

The struggles she has to go through
The pain she endures
No one can relate no matter how much they say they can
Because a female’s path is not only carried out on land
Her feelings fly high as the sky
And deeper than an earthworm in the soil
Her anger is something like hot water when it begins to boil
 
Emotions and feelings no person can see
Which lies within her heart and that’s something I can guarantee 
Because they are trapped behind a brick wall
Then encased in a steel box
And then wrapped by big steel locks

Why is her path so rough?
Why is it so hard for her to stay straight?
Why is it so hard to get to a females heart?

Their path is so rough because they got a lot on their plate
Let alone they try to look for that perfect mate
It’s so hard for her to stay straight because of guys
Yes I have grown to accept that and become wise
Guys treat girls as if they were toys
They play with them
They treat them good while she is brand new
Then a new girl comes along
And unfortunately for the other it’s a sad love song
Little do guys know a female’s heart is strong
That’s why it’s so hard to get to
It’s funny because a lot of guys have not even the slightest clue

Most guys don’t think bout the 80/20 rule
And that’s why when they leave their 80 for a 20 they drown in a deep dark pool
I must say I have almost perfected the ways and strategies
In getting to a girls heart
But little do they know…
I am different in so many ways
But to them I am just the same

But who am I to blame
When that’s all they see and know
But maybe its time for a female’s path to grow
I wish I can pick out each one
And put them in God’s bath
And create a whole new outlook on a female’s path

© Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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