A Feeling of People

A grace among men, is a Valor not known to others,
A pride among us, is a feeling of trust,

We strive and push what we know,
Our bodies break and bend,
We want to keep our friends,

The hurt, the pain, the destruct unto ourselves,
It is what keeps us thriving for happiness among life,

A feeling, A thought, My weight in us, I will always know, No matter how far i go, 
My eternal Light is shown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brown Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 7:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Eric. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol
Edwards Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 8:00 AM
What a simple elegant poem that speaks volumes Eric.. its lovely xxx Hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace