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A Feather In the Forest

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Leaving my son's house, a rain burst had just passed, and the at the edge of the wood, contrasted against dark clouds, a single tree stood glowing wet in the suns rays, leaves shimmering in the breeze.
A feather in the forest glowing
Brightly shining green yellow
A cottonwood applaudes the coming of the rains
Waving glimmering in rain rays
Reminding me to dance in the sun
Wet enlightening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:38:00 PM
A cottonwood applauds // lovely words- beautiful poem
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Date: 8/9/2018 3:10:00 PM
Come check out my stuff. :)
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Date: 8/8/2018 5:41:00 PM
You write like a ray of light. Good job!
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:05:00 AM
Exceptional poetry from a true and gifted poet! A fav, a shining gem...
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Date: 7/22/2018 9:52:00 AM
This is a lovely image.I find nature so inspiring as well.Thank you Kevin you’re a kindred spirit and your poetry is much appreciated.
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Date: 7/20/2018 1:04:00 AM
Awesome imagery!
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Date: 7/18/2018 6:39:00 AM
Beautifully condensed in deep graphics and rhyme. A dance in the sun for certain.
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Date: 7/18/2018 2:06:00 AM
Lightens the heart as light as the feather Simple and short
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:08:00 PM
I liked reading your poem!
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Date: 7/17/2018 12:19:00 PM
Beautiful read, I often get inspired by a sound or a memory, picture ect!
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Date: 7/17/2018 12:13:00 PM
A very enjoyable write... welcome Kevin!!! Cheers Jack XOX
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:08:00 PM
Hi Kevin.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you.. I may have already commented on your poetry! Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Date: 7/8/2018 9:07:00 PM
Kevin.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:41:00 PM
Hello Kevin Lawrence I can see this scene as I read your poem. have a nice day my friend.
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