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A Fatal Dose

She sent a fatal dose of goodbye minus the smile. My lungs crawled about in search of their next breath... diluted, tearless emotions showed cracks in the corners. Honesty can be cruel, brutal at best. Imprisoned deception was freed on good behavior. We always said it would kill again...

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Date: 11/6/2015 5:20:00 PM
Very, very, good! I have felt this and never been able to describe it - this poem certainly works for me ... CayCay
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