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A farewell to the one I once loved

How did I love thee? Let me count the ways. I loved thee with open arms Embracing, exploring Undiscovered territories. I loved thee in floor plans and daydreams. I loved thee too far ahead In places where we are yet to belong to In places where we will never be. In truth, perhaps, I loved you only in theory. For how could I have loved you When the present is shackled And I unable to free it for I have not its key? Have I even loved when I only fought for its potential? Can I be blamed for trying to love prematurely?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/20/2024 6:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.