Notes About The Poem

A valedictory poem that's rich in rhythm and percussive beats from beginning to end.

A Farewell in Short-Writ Song

This song, which flows and beats, 
     must throb with iambic stress
to this line and repeat      
     the measure, more or less.     

This song has lines and rows
     that move with good meter,
to feet of highs and lows
     that's nice, tight, and neater.

It, too, must be short-writ
     with not so lengthy rhyme,
so restless ears can hear it   
     in notes which shorten time.  

     (Albeit, nonetheless!)
This brief song now must end
     with a farewell address:
"Adieu! May we part, friend?" 
     I ask—so, please, nod “Yes!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Up beat and ambitious indeed. Cool poem.
Nguyen Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Thanks, Ronald! Ngoc. :-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace