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A Fantasy at Fall's End

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For Line Gauthier's Bite Size 94 Poetry Contest This is an excerpt of an old autumn poem of mine that I revised for Line's contest. _____________________________________________________________
At fall's end, I breathe her colors in and sigh. Unleashed, I soar with leaves, for it's a thrill to taste chill wind and dance into the sky. Unclad and glad, I swirl with clouds until I drift through mist. Farewell to all of this. Winter soon will bring my lips its snow-wet kiss.

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Date: 12/28/2024 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Date: 12/29/2024 2:40:00 PM
Thanks. But hm is no win.
Date: 12/7/2024 7:04:00 PM
A thrill it is to read, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 12/6/2024 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on HM, soupmail sweet andrea
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Date: 11/30/2024 11:51:00 AM
This is just lovely, and I love the internal rhyme and ending...gorgeous. <3
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Date: 11/29/2024 1:27:00 PM
Lovely poem Andrea sharing autumns's goodbye. Wishing you a win for the Contest.
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Date: 11/29/2024 12:13:00 PM
A Beautiful poem heralding Autumn goodbye, good luck in the contest Andrea. xx
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Date: 11/28/2024 11:59:00 PM
Snow wet kiss! Wow this is so beautiful and so descriptive too! An easily a new fave for me! I love also the opening line in this and the rest just flows in such a poetic manner! So evocative too! Best wishes for the contest. I like writing for bite size too . I might do it, hope your day went well: sending you light sweet andrea
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Date: 11/28/2024 5:14:00 PM
just beautiful and touching, enjoyed every image and word, thanks andrea poet
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