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For Line Gauthier's Bite Size 94 Poetry Contest This is an excerpt of an old autumn poem of mine that I revised for Line's contest. _____________________________________________________________

A Fantasy at Fall's End

At fall's end, I breathe her colors in and sigh.
Unleashed, I soar with leaves, for it's a thrill
to taste chill wind and dance into the sky.
Unclad and glad, I swirl with clouds until
I drift through mist. Farewell to all of this.
Winter soon will bring my lips its snow-wet kiss.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Thanks. But hm is no win.
mysore Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 7:04 PM
A thrill it is to read, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Empress Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on HM, soupmail sweet andrea
Hind Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 11:51 AM
This is just lovely, and I love the internal rhyme and ending...gorgeous. <3
Tor Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 1:27 PM
Lovely poem Andrea sharing autumns's goodbye. Wishing you a win for the Contest.
Read Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 12:13 PM
A Beautiful poem heralding Autumn goodbye, good luck in the contest Andrea. xx
Empress Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Snow wet kiss! Wow this is so beautiful and so descriptive too! An easily a new fave for me! I love also the opening line in this and the rest just flows in such a poetic manner! So evocative too! Best wishes for the contest. I like writing for bite size too . I might do it, hope your day went well: sending you light sweet andrea
Rolland Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 5:14 PM
just beautiful and touching, enjoyed every image and word, thanks andrea poet
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