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A Fantastic Ride

Okay, I'm at it again, hope you're ready my friends A mushy love poem from this old dude He ain't dead yet, still got some oats to still spread Block your eyes if you don't like rude Well, I'll try my best but there are no guarantees At my advanced age, I've lost all control The best I can say with any assuredness is this I'll try as I sit here in my old camisole Now that may sound like I've gone over the edge I'm teetering but I'm still hanging on At times though, it does enter this old mind But till now I can still greet the dawn Wish me luck in my future endeavors won't you Need all the help you guys can provide If I can't get enough, I'll drift off into the sunset But be aware, I had a fantastic ride!

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Date: 3/28/2018 3:19:00 PM
Awesome poem Jack..
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/28/2018 3:49:00 PM
Have you as THE master bard!!! Can't even come close!!! Cheers "Sir" SO (grin)!
Date: 3/28/2018 9:50:00 AM
Morning jack, you're in fine flow today. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/28/2018 10:08:00 AM
It's Tom the Bomb!!! Good morning Thomas!!! Have a good one... your friend and mine, Happy Jack LOL

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