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A False Reality

You're an illiterate literate, a contradictory existence Your stupidity is obvious, your ignorance, consistent. You major in directions and minor in detail Yet you speak in tongues and write in braille. You base your thoughts off of hopes and dreams Off of useless prayers or so it seems, No one can dive into the depths of your mind For it's an endless pit, an abandoned mine Ignorance is bliss, or so you say With that saying, you lead the way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2013 1:40:00 PM
A deep write Don, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2013 8:29:00 PM
ha.......one of the best insult poems I have ever read. I wonder who the ignorant s.o.b. is.........great write.
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Date: 9/17/2013 12:09:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Don ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 7:29:00 PM
Don,,,. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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