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A Falling Leaf

Remember the time you told me you were scared when you were not this big. Then the wind were like the warriors of opposite house trying to break the castle down but you stood cold as you could, sorry that i couldnt be like you. The warriors come often to break us apart & take us away but, i'm afraid i wont be able to stand firm. Its better to fall down before they flee me away & i become a disgrace to you & all my brothers. I am sorry dad but i cant I cant. - Abhishek Kandare 3/22/2018

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Date: 3/27/2018 5:18:00 AM
Awesome poem. So much depth and emotion in this verse. Thanks for writing and posting this masterpiece. -JWE
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Abhishek Kandare
Date: 3/27/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much JW Earnings. Glad you like it! btw Great work on Cry loved it! Hope to match your level someday haha :)
Date: 3/22/2018 6:43:00 AM
So nice.
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Abhishek Kandare
Date: 3/28/2018 5:14:00 AM
Tysm
Date: 3/22/2018 6:43:00 AM
So nice.
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Date: 3/22/2018 6:42:00 AM
So nice.
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