A Fallen Angel

They were God's people'
The most postulant among men
If you believe in Jesus
Then you will know
That they do carry sin
         -----
Subjugated and infested
By the sin's of their time
They lurk in the shadow's
In the recesses'
Of the human mind
They some-how garnish
All the truth in salvation
To do dirty deed's
Using frustration
With death and emnity
Here come's their elation
             -----
So, listen to this warning
Listen to it all
For the fallen Angel
Serves' as a recluse
      For us all
For all whom shall fall
              ----
So, take my advice
And just stay away
Fore they will steal
All your spirit
On any given day'

            GF
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/4/2012 4:35:00 PM
In holy Quran there is no Fallen Angel...Angels have no well of choice they only worship God(Allah) and can't disobey him....However It is mentioned that the devil was named Iblees He was from Jinn ..God lifted him in order to worship him with the Angles....Then he didn't prostrate to Adam because of pride. Regards
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
Bravo! (: I was very well impressed with this fine piece of literature (: I'll be sure to check in on your works more often.
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Date: 8/10/2011 3:02:00 PM
A well written poem. Give one a spiritual thought. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my work, JancarlC.
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Date: 8/10/2011 2:02:00 AM
Great messege here Gary....well penned my friend....thanks for sharing
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:37:00 AM
What a lovely message, Gary
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:03:00 AM
I understand your message and it's a good warning to heed. . Cool poem. Have a great one
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