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A Fall haiku sequence

'neath the chestnut tree flakes of green,cover this scene- autumn blankets me 'neath the chestnut tree conkers* abound,all around- a none-er strikes me *conkers=horse chestnut seeds-provide a schoolyard autumn pastime-wiki or google for more info

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Date: 10/5/2011 3:56:00 PM
I like learning about that word conkers! Very pretty sequence, especially the first one. Thanks for the placement in your last contest! andrea
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:27:00 AM
You have painted a lovely scene of fall in your Haiku's Brian, just lovely, and I want to thank you so much for my first place win in your Verse contest, I am so happy and pleased and honored and proud today, I wrote my verse about the pond while actually sitting there in the park not far from my home, I guess being in the moment helps us to write better ~~ Love Constance
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