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A Fall Dream

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ashen leaves of fall
with pinecones bedded down
lost in snowy dreams

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William Darnell Sr

Date: 9/3/2022 1:11:00 PM

Hi, JC! What a beautiful haiku you've written here. “Ashen leaves of fall,” is my favorite line. When I read the word, 'ashen,’ I knew it was eloquent in its form, already. Great penning, JC. Best of Wishes, William

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2020 11:00:00 PM

Just read all 3 of your Haikus .. Great imagery in all.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/3/2020 5:08:00 PM

Love both image and haiku Panagiota xx

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 4/27/2020 7:59:00 PM

Love the haiku, I get 7 syllables in line 2.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 5/17/2020 12:39:00 PM

Ah, thank you for your comment most appreciative.

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 4/21/2020 7:21:00 PM

nice image comes to mind with this haiku, great pic and work!

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/23/2020 4:15:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind words and lovely reading of my poem. Blessings

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2020 8:50:00 AM

The pine cone comes to life in the coming season. We only fear winter because while sleeping we forget that spring is but a breath away.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/19/2020 11:56:00 AM

To me, especially around the holidays, winter is like a dreamland full of magic. My favorite season is the Fall, but I love the changing of all seasons. There is a grace in this. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Blessings my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2020 7:29:00 AM

Such creativity and craftsmanship in this Haiku JC - your pen writes with a poetically talented hand and totally heartfelt. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/18/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you. I do try to write from the heart. It's the only kind of poetry I know with the exception of the Haiku.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2020 4:45:00 PM

Thumbs up for this short poetic offering, JC. Both your words and accompanying picture compliment each other superbly. ~ Regards // paul

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/17/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, I do love a Haiku. Stay safe my friend

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/13/2020 6:47:00 AM

A beautiful image ...

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/14/2020 3:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kai. Stay safe, and I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2020 1:37:00 PM

- A priceless, haiku JC:) - ... I love this wonderful poem form ... one of my favorites :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/12/2020 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the beautiful comment and hugs. I also love the Haiku form; it is one of my favorites too. I hope all is well and Happy Easter. Hugs. JC hawkens

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/9/2020 4:03:00 PM

Awesome poetry here! :) Have a wonderful day ~

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 3:35:00 PM

You are most kind, my friend. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Have a beautiful day and stay well, my friend. JC Hawkens

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2020 3:58:00 PM

what a delightful haiku and the title is super, I love autumn and its gorgeous colours:-) hugs Jan xx

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 3:32:00 PM

I love all the seasons, but for some reason, Autumn is my favorite. Thank you for the beautiful words of encouragement. Stay safe. JC Hawkens

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/31/2020 11:45:00 PM

Well composed. Keep it up.Blessing.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 3:29:00 PM

Anisha, You have filled my heart with many blessings, indeed. Thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement. I am so glad that you took the time to read my poem. Bless you and stay safe my friend. JC Hawkens