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A Fall Dream

ashen leaves of fall
with pinecones bedded down
lost in snowy dreams

Copyright © Jc Hawkens | Year Posted 2019

autumndreamnatureseasonssnowhaiku

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William Darnell Sr

September 3, 2022 at 1:11 PM

Hi, JC! What a beautiful haiku you've written here. “Ashen leaves of fall,” is my favorite line. When I read the word, 'ashen,’ I knew it was eloquent in its form, already. Great penning, JC. Best of Wishes, William

May 13, 2020 at 11:00 PM

Just read all 3 of your Haikus .. Great imagery in all.

Panagiota Romios

May 3, 2020 at 5:08 PM

Love both image and haiku Panagiota xx

J Hamilton Gist

April 27, 2020 at 7:59 PM

Love the haiku, I get 7 syllables in line 2.

May 17, 2020 at 12:39 PM

Ah, thank you for your comment most appreciative.

April 21, 2020 at 7:21 PM

nice image comes to mind with this haiku, great pic and work!

April 23, 2020 at 4:15 PM

Thank you very much for the kind words and lovely reading of my poem. Blessings

Richard Lamoureux

April 19, 2020 at 8:50 AM

The pine cone comes to life in the coming season. We only fear winter because while sleeping we forget that spring is but a breath away.

April 19, 2020 at 11:56 AM

To me, especially around the holidays, winter is like a dreamland full of magic. My favorite season is the Fall, but I love the changing of all seasons. There is a grace in this. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Blessings my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

April 18, 2020 at 7:29 AM

Such creativity and craftsmanship in this Haiku JC - your pen writes with a poetically talented hand and totally heartfelt. Blessings, Jennifer.

April 18, 2020 at 3:27 PM

Thank you. I do try to write from the heart. It's the only kind of poetry I know with the exception of the Haiku.

April 16, 2020 at 4:45 PM

Thumbs up for this short poetic offering, JC. Both your words and accompanying picture compliment each other superbly. ~ Regards // paul

April 17, 2020 at 5:54 PM

Thank you, Paul, I do love a Haiku. Stay safe my friend

Kai Michael Neumann

April 13, 2020 at 6:47 AM

A beautiful image ...

April 14, 2020 at 3:59 PM

Thank you very much, Kai. Stay safe, and I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 12, 2020 at 1:37 PM

- A priceless, haiku JC:) - ... I love this wonderful poem form ... one of my favorites :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

April 12, 2020 at 7:15 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the beautiful comment and hugs. I also love the Haiku form; it is one of my favorites too. I hope all is well and Happy Easter. Hugs. JC hawkens

David William Breidenthal

April 9, 2020 at 4:03 PM

Awesome poetry here! :) Have a wonderful day ~

April 11, 2020 at 3:35 PM

You are most kind, my friend. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Have a beautiful day and stay well, my friend. JC Hawkens

April 7, 2020 at 3:58 PM

what a delightful haiku and the title is super, I love autumn and its gorgeous colours:-) hugs Jan xx

April 11, 2020 at 3:32 PM

I love all the seasons, but for some reason, Autumn is my favorite. Thank you for the beautiful words of encouragement. Stay safe. JC Hawkens

March 31, 2020 at 11:45 PM

Well composed. Keep it up.Blessing.

April 11, 2020 at 3:29 PM

Anisha, You have filled my heart with many blessings, indeed. Thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement. I am so glad that you took the time to read my poem. Bless you and stay safe my friend. JC Hawkens

Suzanne Delaney

February 9, 2020 at 8:43 AM

Wonderful Haiku,JC: Great imagery and allusion. Welcome to poetry soup. SuZ

March 29, 2020 at 5:50 PM

Thank you very much for the kind words and the welcome. Stay safe

January 29, 2020 at 11:40 AM

very nice image. I am fond of pine cones and have a white fir in my garden.

March 29, 2020 at 5:49 PM

Thank you. I love all things about the Fall. Stay safe.

January 10, 2020 at 11:24 AM

Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

January 10, 2020 at 8:25 PM

Thank you for the inspirational words. This indeed is a wonderful comment. Thank you very much.

January 8, 2020 at 7:52 PM

That's where those pinecones went! Nice haiku, J.C! ~ Gershon

January 10, 2020 at 8:21 PM

lol. Thank you, Gershon, for the wonderful complement.

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2020 at 1:15 PM

what a beauty!

January 10, 2020 at 8:20 PM

Andrea, Thank you for the kind words.

January 5, 2020 at 11:36 AM

Delightful, JC.

January 10, 2020 at 8:19 PM

Thank you for the compliment, Line Gauthier. Happy New Year.

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