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ashen leaves of fall with pinecones bedded down lost in snowy dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/13/2020 11:00:00 PM
Just read all 3 of your Haikus .. Great imagery in all.
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Date: 5/3/2020 5:08:00 PM
Love both image and haiku Panagiota xx
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Date: 4/27/2020 7:59:00 PM
Love the haiku, I get 7 syllables in line 2.
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Date: 5/17/2020 12:39:00 PM
Ah, thank you for your comment most appreciative.
Date: 4/21/2020 7:21:00 PM
nice image comes to mind with this haiku, great pic and work!
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Date: 4/23/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words and lovely reading of my poem. Blessings
Date: 4/19/2020 7:56:00 PM
Very well written, JC - great talent.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 4/19/2020 8:50:00 AM
The pine cone comes to life in the coming season. We only fear winter because while sleeping we forget that spring is but a breath away.
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Date: 4/19/2020 11:56:00 AM
To me, especially around the holidays, winter is like a dreamland full of magic. My favorite season is the Fall, but I love the changing of all seasons. There is a grace in this. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/18/2020 7:29:00 AM
Such creativity and craftsmanship in this Haiku JC - your pen writes with a poetically talented hand and totally heartfelt. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/18/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thank you. I do try to write from the heart. It's the only kind of poetry I know with the exception of the Haiku.
Date: 4/16/2020 4:45:00 PM
Thumbs up for this short poetic offering, JC. Both your words and accompanying picture compliment each other superbly. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/17/2020 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, I do love a Haiku. Stay safe my friend
Date: 4/13/2020 6:47:00 AM
A beautiful image ...
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Date: 4/14/2020 3:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kai. Stay safe, and I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/12/2020 1:37:00 PM
- A priceless, haiku JC:) - ... I love this wonderful poem form ... one of my favorites :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the beautiful comment and hugs. I also love the Haiku form; it is one of my favorites too. I hope all is well and Happy Easter. Hugs. JC hawkens
Date: 4/9/2020 4:03:00 PM
Awesome poetry here! :) Have a wonderful day ~
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Date: 4/11/2020 3:35:00 PM
You are most kind, my friend. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Have a beautiful day and stay well, my friend. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/7/2020 3:58:00 PM
what a delightful haiku and the title is super, I love autumn and its gorgeous colours:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2020 3:32:00 PM
I love all the seasons, but for some reason, Autumn is my favorite. Thank you for the beautiful words of encouragement. Stay safe. JC Hawkens
Date: 3/31/2020 11:45:00 PM
Well composed. Keep it up.Blessing.
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Date: 4/11/2020 3:29:00 PM
Anisha, You have filled my heart with many blessings, indeed. Thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement. I am so glad that you took the time to read my poem. Bless you and stay safe my friend. JC Hawkens
Date: 2/9/2020 8:43:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku,JC: Great imagery and allusion. Welcome to poetry soup. SuZ
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words and the welcome. Stay safe
Date: 1/29/2020 11:40:00 AM
very nice image. I am fond of pine cones and have a white fir in my garden.
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thank you. I love all things about the Fall. Stay safe.
Date: 1/10/2020 11:24:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:25:00 PM
Thank you for the inspirational words. This indeed is a wonderful comment. Thank you very much.
Date: 1/8/2020 7:52:00 PM
That's where those pinecones went! Nice haiku, J.C! ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:21:00 PM
lol. Thank you, Gershon, for the wonderful complement.
Date: 1/5/2020 1:15:00 PM
what a beauty!
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:20:00 PM
Andrea, Thank you for the kind words.
Date: 1/5/2020 11:36:00 AM
Delightful, JC.
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:19:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Line Gauthier. Happy New Year.