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For Eve Roper's You Live In A Fantasy World Poetry Contest

7 8 9 7 8 8 9 7 syllable count AB AB CACA rhyme scheme.

Fantasy I live each day. With cute butterflies, dragonflies, bumblebees, and katydids I play. At dawn I see the sun rise, beaming so lovely in the sky. Heaven is azure every day. From my flower perch I watch birds fly as in mild breezes I sway.

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Crystol Woods

Date: 12/13/2024 10:58:00 AM

Lovely and the same shade of beautiful as the painting! Xo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2024 5:49:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2024 4:24:00 AM

- A lovely poem for Eve's painting, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/12/2024 8:54:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Great last line... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/7/2024 2:50:00 PM

So beautiful and dreamlike, Andrea! Great writing! :)

QuotesVib QuotesVib

Date: 12/6/2024 3:24:00 AM

What a fascinating poem! I it inspires us to see more poetry in the simple things in life.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/3/2024 11:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. "Good Luck" I also enjoyed writing on this one. Have a fun day writing away.............

Jay Narain

Date: 12/3/2024 10:35:00 AM

Nice poem with great imagery.

R J. Elless

Date: 12/3/2024 7:26:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Vivid striking imagery. Have a great day.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/3/2024 3:43:00 AM

How heavenly and beautiful is your take on this picture prompt. Your way rhymes is always impressive as they always flow so well and never sounds forced: you are just a natural! This is such a pretty poem that i truly enjoyed reading! Best wishes for the contest: sending you light alwaysss

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/3/2024 2:00:00 AM

Let fairies enlighten our dawns with happy frolics.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/3/2024 12:52:00 AM

Wouldn't it be great if life was like that, not a care in the world and sunshine every day. Good luck in the contest Andrea, hope your week is going well. Tom