A Fairy-Like Mind

Sure love eating, can't wait for dinnertime In my psyche, eating food is deeply enshrined Trying to eat less Difficult at best Just fading away in my fairy-like mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:34 PM
How is your diet going?
Cresswell Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:27 PM
I am happy for you you have worked hard.
Ellison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Good good good news!!! Goes in increments of about 4 pounds... at 203, next one will take me under 200!!! YEEHAW!!! xxx
Flats Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:56 AM
The more I eat less, the less I eat more//I find it much easier to breach any door//I once was thick//now I'm a stick//and I don't line up for seconds no more! FADE ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 9:06 AM
I remember those plumpy days!!! That's the past... NEVER AGAIN!!! Have a good 'un JJ!!!
Sivey Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:12 AM
I've got a Limerick for you...check out my Pigs Sty poem!!
Ellison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Will do...
Sivey Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Don't go and eat too little, not having the nutrients you need for daily living isn't good either, you must have a good balance, which is hard to achieve, if only we all could get that! You write is surely well balanced however! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have brought to me a smile with this funny piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Belong to a site that's keeping me on track... no worries! CHEERS!!!
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