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Poem written - 11th July 2023

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A Fairy Tale of Romance - Story Poem

Once upon a dreamy fairy tale night Two lover's hearts went soaring off in flight The setting a magical seaside scene Enchanting beauty befitting a queen. Fairies gathered to gaze from on a star For romance delighted their tiny hearts
So enthralling was this mystical sight They sprinkled their fairy dust o'er the night. Sequin-silver jewels enhanced night sky Twinkling on the sea as waves rippled by Soft golden sand cushioned the lovers feet As they strolled along the crescent shaped beach. Only sound was the opera of sea A soothing oceanic melody The summer breeze caressed their sun kissed skin Just as their rendezvous was to begin. He took her in his arms and held her tight Whispered "darling you look lovely tonight" In a tender moment of bliss they kissed Pledging their love would stay a lifelong tryst. They danced merrily in splendour of sea For today they joined in matrimony.
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Flood Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Congrats on your win, Belle, with this poem that proves romance is not dead… just busily washing sand from just about everywhere… darn it… I didn’t mean to lower the tone. ;-) seriously though, a smashing write and a well deserved win. Terry
Edmonds  Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Ha! washing sand from everywhere, those were the days my friend :) Thanks for the congratulations and delightful comments Terry… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write/story/ending you have here. Lovely... Have a great day.....................
Edmonds  Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Thank you Paula, have a great day too… Belle
Alex Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Big story. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Edmonds  Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Thank you very much Christuraj… Belle
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:29 AM
Great romantic story, Belle, congratulations:)
Edmonds  Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Thank you Jo… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Hi Belle we must be on a similar wave length between your pond and mine. Mine isn't for the competition but it is a narrative, story, love poem. LOVED IT. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you Jennifer, will go right away to read your poem. Blessings and hugs in return ~ Belle
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Oh my goodness, this is so very sweet! I love it!! A fave, just lovely!! :) <3
Edmonds  Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 8:30 AM
BJ, thank you so much, your words touch my heart ~ Belle :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 1:02 PM
a very happily ever kind of fairy tale story this is, Belle. Beautiful lines of description.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Thank you dry much indeed Andrea ~ Belle
Cassell Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 10:33 AM
What a beautiful poem. I could feel the sand between my toes as I walked on the beach. I enjoyed the vivid imagery.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Truly grateful for those words, thank you Rev Catherine… Belle
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 8:23 AM
- How beautiful and well written, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, appreciated ~ Belle
Meadows Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 1:41 AM
A beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading this post. Well written.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Jeanette, so pleased that you enjoyed the read… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 12:57 AM
A brilliant and wonderful poem. Best for a win.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Thank you so very much Victor, I’m delighted with your words of encouragement… Belle
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