A Fairy Ring

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Dizain
A dizain is a type of poem that follows a prescribed format of syllables per line while adhering to a certain rhyme scheme. A dizain should be comprised of a single 10-line stanza which includes 10 syllables in every line and is written in accordance with this rhyme scheme: ababbccdcd.

Feeling soft soil squishing between my toes is but one pleasure my garden provides. I love how its sweet smells engage my nose, the sunshine, fresh air, and much more besides. I've never used chemical pesticides and welcome nature's critters every spring, from caterpillars to the birds that sing. Color draws butterflies to sip nectar, while wild mushrooms create a fairy ring encircling my placid pool reflector. (Dizain) 06/10/2020

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Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2020 5:24:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your win in my garden contests with this beautifully penned poem _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/18/2020 6:48:00 PM

Thanks Constance, I appreciate it, I do love gardens, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 7:05:00 PM

I enjoyed reading all about YOUR garden which thankfully is natural! Sounds amazing! Congrats too for your win

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/14/2020 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I do miss spending time in the garden, but this pandemic has taken that pleasure form me this year, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/13/2020 6:50:00 PM

Spending a few moments in nature's regime enlightens our hearts graciously. Beautiful words Emile. Congratulations on your win :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/14/2020 10:24:00 AM

Thanks Aditi, you sum it up beautifully my friend, stay safe, Emile.