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"a Failure"

A failure is seduce by its up and down.a storm of worries unites in my mind.prefer to be a winner . do not asept the role that society foist on you. They deceptively play with your aperreance . Its hard to trust in this confusing world. Ill maintain my my trust in side me . Knowing that failure will stand right beside me. by "joseph pichardo"

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Amy Sullivan

Date: 10/29/2010 7:08:00 AM

Stunning Work! Well done*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2010 11:48:00 AM

Good job on having confidence in yourself..Welcome to soup...May your stay be long with many more excellent post of your well written work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2010 7:11:00 PM

I prefer to be a WINNER also Joshep and your Bio is indeed insightful... u might want to go into your personal info and change your spelling unless u want to leave it joshep...its rather unique.. I like it..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 6:07:00 PM

Hello, Joshep! Failure is one of the biggest flaws in life. With a mind torture to never succeed in anything. We are all better than that, my poet friend. Failure is only a belief, not reality. One can apply their lives to the concept of failing, but sooner or later we must all wake up before we go sour. Enjoyed your poem, thanks for the invite of your poem. Please let me know when you write a new one. Later,..LeeAnn

Joshep Pichardo

Date: 9/23/2010 3:24:00 PM

il be coming with a new poem called temttions..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2010 10:48:00 AM

It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Joshep. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Jamila Strong

Date: 9/22/2010 6:19:00 PM

interesting