A Failed Marriage

My shallow waters have failed to hide the deeper agony pulsating inside. I could forgive your lies but not forget. Do you have remorse, do you feel regret? Feelings were buried in a shallow grave as we failed to mend the love God gave. You failed to speak and I failed to listen, Fingers are pale where golden bands once glistened. Broken hearts called to each other refusing to bend. Not so long ago, I called you my best friend. Now, I'm left to grieve my failed marriage. The love we shared, your words disparaged. I could forgive your lies but not forget. Where is your remorse or display of regret? I can no longer burden myself with this shame. Standing tall, I have given my sorrow a name. I struggled to save our once happy home, but you chipped it away when you decided to roam. So goodbye I shout to you and to failure! Moving forward, your love is no longer my cure. My life is becoming a new adventure, and memories of your face are becoming a blur. Yes, I could have forgiven your lies, tried to forget, if your heart felt remorse or just a little regret. * a work of fiction For Nailed or Failed Contest (Black Eyed Susan)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/6/2014 9:27:00 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:03:00 PM
Awesome work of fiction on your featured poem Rhonda :)
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Date: 6/9/2012 8:51:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your winning poem! I look forward to reading more :)
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Date: 6/8/2012 1:19:00 PM
Heartfelt and excellent write....glad it's fiction.
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Date: 6/8/2012 2:09:00 AM
Excellent work Rhonda congratulations xx
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:29:00 PM
Wow Rhonda! This was fantastic! A BIG congratulations to you on this win ...Samia :)
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Your poem would be helpful for any one struggling in this situation. Like the ending because it is uplifting and strong.
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Susan's "Nailed or Failed"contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 8:53:00 PM
So emotive - a well deserved win.
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:07:00 PM
Emotive! Pleased this is fiction....u are too precious to have to endure something of this magnitude. :) Congrats on a poem that I knew was a true winner. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:31:00 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SUSAN'S contest. take care ;-) ~ Always PD
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:48:00 PM
This stirs so much emotion I cannot even comment. Gifted, that's what u are! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/27/2012 2:46:00 PM
WOW,ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! This is so powerful.Stupendous write!!!
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Date: 5/27/2012 1:14:00 PM
Hope it is not your life Rhonda, just imagination!!!! Very good written, sad but its life.... - Wish you all the best in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/27/2012 1:04:00 PM
You've captured the emotions perfectly, Rhonda - very glad it's fictional. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 5/27/2012 12:53:00 PM
Rhonda all I can say is good luck,,David
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/27/2012 12:55:00 PM
Thanks David. I know it's a downer!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/27/2012 12:53:00 PM
Yes, Gail. I'm good! Just a work of fiction. I had trouble coming up with something positive with the words we were given. Thanks for asking.
Date: 5/27/2012 12:50:00 PM
This was beautifully written but so sad. xoxoxox Red
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