A Failed Marriage

My shallow waters have failed to hide the deeper agony pulsating inside. I could forgive your lies but not forget. Do you have remorse, do you feel regret? Feelings were buried in a shallow grave as we failed to mend the love God gave. You failed to speak and I failed to listen, Fingers are pale where golden bands once glistened. Broken hearts called to each other refusing to bend. Not so long ago, I called you my best friend. Now, I'm left to grieve my failed marriage. The love we shared, your words disparaged. I could forgive your lies but not forget. Where is your remorse or display of regret? I can no longer burden myself with this shame. Standing tall, I have given my sorrow a name. I struggled to save our once happy home, but you chipped it away when you decided to roam. So goodbye I shout to you and to failure! Moving forward, your love is no longer my cure. My life is becoming a new adventure, and memories of your face are becoming a blur. Yes, I could have forgiven your lies, tried to forget, if your heart felt remorse or just a little regret. * a work of fiction For Nailed or Failed Contest (Black Eyed Susan)
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August 6, 2014 at 9:27 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Duncan Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Awesome work of fiction on your featured poem Rhonda :)
Howell Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 8:51 AM
I really enjoyed reading your winning poem! I look forward to reading more :)
Macfarlane Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Heartfelt and excellent write....glad it's fiction.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 2:09 AM
Excellent work Rhonda congratulations xx
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June 7, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Wow Rhonda! This was fantastic! A BIG congratulations to you on this win ...Samia :)
Debole Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Congratulations on your win! Your poem would be helpful for any one struggling in this situation. Like the ending because it is uplifting and strong.
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Susan's "Nailed or Failed"contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:53 PM
So emotive - a well deserved win.
Song Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:07 PM
Emotive! Pleased this is fiction....u are too precious to have to endure something of this magnitude. :) Congrats on a poem that I knew was a true winner. Gwendolen
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SUSAN'S contest. take care ;-) ~ Always PD
Song Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 9:48 PM
This stirs so much emotion I cannot even comment. Gifted, that's what u are! Gwendolen
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 2:46 PM
WOW,ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! This is so powerful.Stupendous write!!!
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:14 PM
Hope it is not your life Rhonda, just imagination!!!! Very good written, sad but its life.... - Wish you all the best in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
Horne Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:04 PM
You've captured the emotions perfectly, Rhonda - very glad it's fictional. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
Williams Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Rhonda all I can say is good luck,,David
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Thanks David. I know it's a downer!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Yes, Gail. I'm good! Just a work of fiction. I had trouble coming up with something positive with the words we were given. Thanks for asking.
Baxter Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:50 PM
This was beautifully written but so sad. xoxoxox Red
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