A Faded Camilia

Violetta gave Alfredo a camilia,
reminding him to bring it back when it had finally faded...
to seal their kiss without its aroma;
would he have kept that promise when it had whitered? 
In a lonely room, with light barely filtering,
Violetta lays in that bed sweetly thinking
of Alfredo's hand comforting her and caring for her in the last hours...
but Annina is by her side, not daring to spread
the sad news that Alfredo has gone, hoping to return before she dies.


Violetta's eyes can hardly see...but her hands
are wrapped around Alfredo' cheerful portrait,
knowing that his love for her is profound and endless,
by feeling the warmth of his tender heart;
and getting closer to death, she wishes he won't return
with a faded camilia...even in Heaven that flame will burn!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/16/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Andrew. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 9:57:00 PM
Kudos andrew for big win in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/15/2011 11:10:00 AM
Now this is an awesome twist, Andrew. Violetta thinks she is holding Alfredo's hand when it is Annina's. Beautifully worded sonnet and the story behind it could have been produced by Hitchcock. Awesome twist! Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:59:00 AM
It's great to see your success Andrew. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with these elegant lines luv.. enjoy your very special honor....my friend...
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in my contest, Andrew
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