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Obliteration. 

 

A single solitary ovaline droplet tear of crimson Eliminated from a ravished A tortured heavy broken heart Descends downward into a vast Deep endless temperamental ocean Diluted and dissipated vanishes into nothingness And oblivion as it was ever there at all Buried as overpowering consuming waves Gather and fold Further drops follow only to be washed away Forever.

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Date: 3/18/2024 8:09:00 PM
Yikes. I felt overwhelming terror reading about the fate of the drop. Powerful penning! ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:41:00 AM
Hi Gershon. So happy to hear from you again. Been a long time my friend. Thank you so much, too kind. Much appreciated. Pete.
Date: 3/17/2024 11:26:00 PM
beautiful! each soul tremor is cognised by the dweller of our heart, stored in the akashic records
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