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Obliteration. 

 

A Drop In The Ocean

A single solitary ovaline droplet tear of crimson 
Eliminated from a ravished
A tortured heavy broken heart
Descends downward into a vast 
Deep endless temperamental ocean
Diluted and dissipated vanishes into nothingness
And oblivion as it was ever there at all
Buried as overpowering consuming waves
Gather and fold
Further drops follow only to be washed away
Forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Yikes. I felt overwhelming terror reading about the fate of the drop. Powerful penning! ~ Gershon
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Hi Gershon. So happy to hear from you again. Been a long time my friend. Thank you so much, too kind. Much appreciated. Pete.
Seeker Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 11:26 PM
beautiful! each soul tremor is cognised by the dweller of our heart, stored in the akashic records
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