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For the 'Ten lines from Ten poems Poetry 
Contest,' sponsored by Silent One.

 

A Dreamy Night

Black onyx night, of the pearlescent moon, diamond dew kissed, musk rose red. Deep purple and white passion! Phantoms dance in lilac dreams; around the corner of blooms, with memories of sunshine. Comparing lovely costumes, in fields, beds and flowerpots, just steps away from moonlight. A polka dot rainbow flared. The names of the poems from which each line above was taken, is listed in order: 1. Precious Black Night 2. Sunshine Missed 3. Lilacs Lacy 4. A Fruitful Day 5. Hibiscus Hypnotic 6. Van Gogh's Flowers 7. A Final Sundown 8. Impossible Primroses 9. Redolent 10. Polka Dot Rainbow
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Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Ahhh so cool you made the winner list. I just knew this would be a major contender. Congrats.
Buehler Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Heartfelt thanks for your warm congratulations, Andrea. :)
One Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 8:55 AM
I love the imagery you created in your poem... each line is unique in that, from colours to flowers... love the line about phantoms dance in lilac dreams... This was a very difficult contest to judge, but yours was always a winner for me.. Thank you for writing for my final contest and congratulations on your placement..
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 2:26 PM
I was so delighted to be in your final contest, Silent One! I am thrilled and honored to have placed in this contest, which was a lot of fun for me. Thank you so much for your lovely words of congratulations. Very best wishes.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 1:30 AM
Perfectly combined lines from various poems. Enjoyed the red. Wishing you a happy and healthy 2025. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Thank you very much for the positive, happy thoughts, and for the zestful, holiday greeting. Very best wishes for the New Year ahead. :)
Rolland Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 4:35 PM
beautiful and loving poetry, just wonderful, thanks merry christmas
Buehler Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Thank you for your kind words, dear Yann. Merry Christmas to you, too. :)
Empress Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 2:13 AM
I think this silent one will love, its his style youv gone for and painted imagery in such an ethereal manner too! I absolutely love the way youv expressed and written in such a magical manner! This truly is a fave for me! Best wishes poetic soul! And happy holidays
Buehler Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Your warm words and your fave made me smile, Ink. Thank you very much for your gracious remarks, which evoke happiness. Warmest holiday wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 7:28 PM
Wow. You concocted something very lovely
Buehler Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 1:48 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. :)
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