A Dreamer’s Dream

A Dreamer’s Dream

In my dreams, my thoughts wove 
a tapestry, and on silken wings, I 
watched their vision take flight.
Off they went, defying obstacles and
shaping destines with a great force 
of might.
They painted a picture of blue skies 
with limitless possibilities to reach 
great heights.
I saw in my dreams how to unlock 
the chains preventing me from 
enjoying the starlight.

In this magical sphere of dreamland,
I saw fairies dancing with daisies in 
their hair,
And watched as they gracefully 
waved their silver wands, spreading
stardust everywhere, 
My thoughts were clear, as they 
could distinguish between fantasy 
and reality.
As I felt my heart and soul released
feelings of stress as they found 
peace and tranquillity.

With my eyes closed, under the 
moonlight, I bask at the end of my 
day.
On weightless clouds, in my dreams,
I lay peacefully listening to what my 
heartbeats say,
Sometimes, they say, with no 
restraints, you can do as you please.
And sometimes they say you’re 
lucky to see dreams such as these.


by Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/20/2024 3:41:00 AM
I really love your poems, both delicate and sweet
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Date: 5/17/2024 3:30:00 PM
An enchanting read dear Zyrool. I love the imagery throughout its poetic lines that are well written, ‘ silken wings, fairies dancing with daisies, silver wands, weightless dreams’ - sounds like a heavenly dream to me. Love the last stanza especially. A real delight to read. Hoping we all have lots of lovely dreams. Blessings to you :):)
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/18/2024 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words, Christina, they sure made my day. Sending Blessings your way. Have a wonderful day and a great weekend, my friend.
Date: 5/15/2024 11:44:00 PM
Beautiful dreams and beautiful poetry...
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/16/2024 12:08:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Silent. Much appreciated. Enjoy your day, my friend.
Date: 5/13/2024 1:41:00 PM
Hi Zyrool, I really like this poem. I've had some incredible dreams in my life. My favorite are when I realize that I'm dreaming. Once I acknowledge that, I've found I can control their outcome. Keep dreaming yourself and keep writing.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/13/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Randy. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’m having fun dabbling with writing. Have a wonderful week ahead.
Date: 5/13/2024 1:07:00 PM
They say to pay attention to dreams.. "I saw in my dreams how to unlock the chains" is perhaps an answer to a question. I enjoy the whimsical fantasy of this verse.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/13/2024 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your support, Hilda. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead,my friend.
Date: 5/13/2024 5:37:00 AM
These are awesome dreams Zyrool. Mine are usually unsettling - Ugh! Hey can we trade? I want to laze on weightless clouds too. Very nice
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/13/2024 6:30:00 AM
Hi Tom, Thank you for the read. Sorry about your bad dreams, you can easily find a spot on those clouds too. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead.
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