A Dream Within a Dream

Beach shore entices me with its silence,
I dream I can walk above the waters,
the wind whispers and leaves a scud of foam.

I hug my solitude from a distance 
some mythical god pulls me by the bend
a vision of two girls rips my senses.

One holds a red parasol, her wind-borne 
whisper trails towards me, captures my mind,
fascinated, I watch as time  stands still.

They are a painting of nymph-like maidens
goddesses of the sea in search of love
I am in a daze invading their world

I should walk away, like the tide that ebbs 
and flows, carry the memory of them
to fade like an invisible mirage.

The sea glides along, spattered with the white 
chevrons of wave caps, timeless but ever 
changing, while I leave clinging to a dream.  

@jjote 06/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Costales Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Thanks everyone for all your comments. Sorry haven't logged in here for a while. Didn't know about this WIN?
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thank you for entering my contest very good write, Josefina, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the Parasol contest.
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Greetings Josefina. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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