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A Dream On My Mind

A dream so real A feeling of being there While asleep in my bed In a wooded area With a narrow winding road Leading me to a river

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Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 4/10/2024 7:04:00 AM

Hello Darlene,a lovely poem.Have a blessed day, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/23/2024 10:11:00 AM

Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2024 10:23:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you Mulu Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Ray Zottola

Date: 8/22/2022 7:15:00 AM

Dear Darlene, Dreams! As I have slowly developed my soul my dreams have returned to much softer introspection. I love short poems that hit the nail on the head. You did!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/22/2022 10:33:00 AM

Hello Ray Zottipla, Oh I am happy to hear it. I agree. with you. Thank you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/15/2022 3:26:00 PM

Love this fantastic poem, Darlene! You are excellent in expressing deep feelings in few words! What a lovely dream ~ the picture of a winding road to the river~ just superb! This is a fave! Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/16/2022 5:44:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes it was a lovely dream. To bad I had to wake up. Thank you for the lovely comment. Love & Friendship, Darlene

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/31/2022 1:52:00 PM

Dreams can take you away. Just make sure you come back so you can write some more. Today, be blessed.......................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2022 3:18:00 PM

Hello Paula, When i dream I am by the water watching the waves, i also have my clipboard with paper writing away. That dream comes often and I do not want to wake up. Some dreams i wake up and wonder what happened Hugs.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/26/2022 8:49:00 AM

A terrific dream my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2022 10:46:00 AM

Hello Caren, i hope I have that dream again. Hugs.

Richard Colbert

Date: 5/20/2022 10:35:00 AM

Wonderfully written. As I sleep in fits and starts, the imagery here makes me want to lie down and sleep. Very nice, Darlene. Richard

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2022 12:04:00 PM

Hello Richard Colbert, I am pleased that my poem made you feel peaceful. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/20/2022 6:30:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2022 12:05:00 PM

Hello Beata, oh you are very welcome Beata. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/20/2022 1:54:00 AM

I don't believe in dreams really. They are part of our life come up to the fore. Maybe some day you wandered towards the sea. Lovely thoughts though.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2022 3:50:00 AM

Hello Victor, dreams are part of our life come up fore! I never thought of dreams that way. Yes maybe some day I will wander towards the sea, river ocean, stream, lake. Enjoyyour day my friend.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/18/2022 3:33:00 PM

I read somewhere that when you dream of water, you will likely find some very insightful information that will help you on your life path. I fill a bit of Deja vu, nice one, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/19/2022 6:40:00 AM

Hello Robert Gorelick, oh Robert this is interesting information. You feel a bit of Deja vu! Wow! Thank you Robert. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2022 7:50:00 PM

Keep going, Darlene. Keep going! I'm right there with you. So real! And I'm not even asleep yet! Love it. Thanks, gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/18/2022 4:16:00 AM

Hello Gershon, oh, Thank you for the company. Enjoy your day my friend.

J. Summers

Date: 5/17/2022 7:12:00 PM

I’ve had seemingly real dreams on occasion and those are the ones I like to ponder. Perhaps your river represents an obstacle of some sort or just the need to wet a line fishing. Enjoyed, and thanks for checking out mine. John

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/18/2022 4:19:00 AM

Hello J. Summers, the real dreams i do ponder and there has been many real dreams. I think this dream means wnat the urge to be by the water. I do not fish. Enjoy your day my friend.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/17/2022 6:55:00 PM

I can clearly see the beautiful scenery in your dream portrayed in your awesome verse my dear friend Darlene. A wonderful dream for me. Thanks a lot for sharing. Have a great day my dear friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/18/2022 4:22:00 AM

Hello Len, I see the scenery clearly in my dream. Yet I have no clue where I am. I know that I feel peaceful there. Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/17/2022 5:12:00 PM

Dear Darlene, I really love your dreamy poem. You so beautifully painted the picture of a wooded area leading to a river - My Gosh, it makes me dream too. Hugs, Dear Friend ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/18/2022 4:23:00 AM

Hello Mala, thank you Mala. Perhaps we have the same dream? Hugs my dear friend.----Darlene

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/17/2022 2:39:00 PM

Heya Darlene, the river is perhaps the source of your dream, I like the way you just end the poem when you reach the river, let’s the reader ponder for themselves what it means, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2022 3:31:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, I also think that the river is the source of my dream. I often dream of water river , lake , ocean , sea. Yes let the reader ponder what it means. --Cheers! David. -----Darlene.