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A Dream Most Worthy

I lay me down upon my bed,
      and lovely thoughts invade my head;
           elusive dreams at best.
Dreams of people no longer hating,
      hand in hand, not hesitating,
            to bless and to be blessed.

No matter race, religion, gender,
      love reaching out with touch so tender,
           we become united.
Alas, for now, it's just a dream,
      but surely a most worthy scheme:
            Brotherly love ignited.

7/23/16
For Broken Wings Two Stanzas Two Only contest
Tail-rhyme  aabccb ddeffe





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Date: 7/28/2016 1:44:00 AM
Awesome, Kim and I see congratulations are in order Way to go.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 7/28/2016 12:02:00 AM
A worthy dream indeed, your win is worth the need, well done ...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you, Don!
Date: 7/26/2016 11:31:00 AM
Good work Kim, congratulations...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 7/26/2016 6:19:00 AM
Congrats Kim, for your awesome WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 7/25/2016 7:06:00 PM
What lovely thoughts and lines here Kim! Congrats on your win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:38:00 PM
Would be wonderful if your dream does come true Kim - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:13:00 PM
Kim, congrats on your placement in the contest with this wonderful poem lady :)-luloo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 7/25/2016 2:57:00 PM
These were two very worthy stanzas, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:30:00 PM
Hi Lin! Thank you for your comment!
Date: 7/24/2016 2:16:00 PM
- Kim, this is really beautiful (7) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I appreciation it!
Date: 7/24/2016 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful write and also it works for Becca's contest!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 7/24/2016 7:23:00 AM
Hi Kim, I enjoyed your poem. It is sad that there is not more love, kindness and tolerance in the world. All the best, JP
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, JP!
Date: 7/24/2016 5:59:00 AM
It's certainly sad that only dreamers can see a world like that. Beautiful sentiments. I feel the same way myself.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 7/23/2016 9:41:00 PM
I love this poem--the style and the theme--a 7 for sure, Kim. Janice
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 7/23/2016 5:48:00 PM
Kim, if poets ruled, surely we would indeed have that dream come true. This is a most beautiful entry for the contest! I hope it does really well! 7 ; )
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/30/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!