A Dream Girl

THERE IS A GIRL THATS IN MY LIFE
I HOPE ONE DAY SHE IS MY WIFE,
AS FOR ALL THE LOVE I HAVE
I TRUST IN YOU AS YOU DRIVE ME MAD,
YOU MAKE MY HEART BEAT LIKE A SPEEDING TRAIN,
I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD FEEL THIS AGAIN,
MY HEART RACES AS TIME GOES ON
AND I WILL LOVE YOU ALL DAY LONG,
MY PULSE IS FLOWING WITH THE BLOOD RUSHING 
THROUGH MY VAINS,
MY HEAD IS POUNDING IT DRIVES ME INSANE,
FOR YOUR LOVE IS LIKE A BURNING DESIRE,
I FEEL LIKE MY HEARTS ON FIRE,
THERE IS ONE THING I ASK OF YOU
IS YOUR LOVE FOR ME IS FOREVER TRUE,
MY MY LIFE I WILL TRAT YOU RIGHT
WILL BE THERE FOR YOU DAY AND NIGHT,
I OFFER YOU ALL THE LOVE I HAVE,
AND PRAY TO MAKE YOU REALLY GLAD,
FOR THERE IS ONE THING THAT YOU SHOULD KNOW
I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU OR LET MY LOVE GO,
AS I PROMISE THE HEAVENS ABOVE,
I WILL ALWAYS GIVE YOU MY ETERNAL LOVE,,,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/18/2011 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:49:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Davy .....:)
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
tanks james
Date: 5/17/2011 5:04:00 PM
Great Job Davy, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
thank you john
Date: 5/17/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Davy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
thank you carol xx
Date: 5/17/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, davy
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:48:00 PM
thank you dr
Date: 5/16/2011 5:00:00 PM
Congrats davy on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight..
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thank you linda
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