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A Dream For Maureen

A Dream For Maureen saw her peeking hesitantly through the window shaped as a page yellowed with age and scented of violets and forget me nots, a posey once given shyly and received with love. I reached toward her she stepped gingerly into my world of words and wishes for a long spring afternoon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
I have to say that this is all very nice, Patricia; and I agree with Victor...I wish I could write a little more like your good self also - beautiful little tribute!! My very warmest wishes! :) john P.s I suspected you might be up all night...no wonder you are feeling grumpy. Chuckles! :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/27/2017 3:51:00 PM
Yes I am too old for all nighters. My sister was in her studio painting so I just kept on writing. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 9/27/2017 8:12:00 AM
Patricia, tears in my coffee this morning, Your words have turned my own into little birds, flashes of colour flying away just when close enough to touch. Thank you dear poetess, a precious gift.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/27/2017 3:47:00 PM
Hey girl I needed the company and a friend makes a perfect afternoon.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:39:00 AM
Patricia my friend, you're well on your way to become one of my favourite poets.... I LOVE this, honestly do. And I see ma mo loves it too <3 :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/27/2017 3:45:00 PM
Oh blushing That is so good of you to say.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:26:00 AM
Yes, this is so beautiful Patricia, I really enjoyed this tremendous poem this morning my friend! I just love the way you wove this together, so very gracious and true! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/27/2017 4:33:00 AM
Good morning Russell how are you and Emma. You are up early.I am just off to bed pulled an all nighter. Thank you for your lovely comment.

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