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A Dream Cloud

I joined the mile high club Love as one began dreaming magic beautiful sunflower rays dancing feelings within clouds gleaming Blossoming flowers within your star lighting crystals frosted dewdrops sparkle inside treasuring soul thoughts embracing warm smiles in dazzling sunshine beams Baby you always take the lead as the winds haunting moans crying through the trees howling one spirit of a lone wolf born under the cold moon Sure as the clouds gather together capping heavily darken with rainfall running down the mountain one silver stream chain towards the great Atlantic Most purest star of blinding light sitting high among'st the angels stunning heartstrings when warmly plucked Strummed touching echoes warm vision of a goddess kissing dark jewels flickering lights up across many oceans always waves land on golden sands footprints our forever unrhymed tercet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/4/2015 12:12:00 PM
Liam Mate!! A Wonderful Pen indeed!! Fabulous imagery abounds. Very Well-Done. Best Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/8/2015 11:30:00 AM
gary pal thank you so deeply for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated pal
Date: 1/4/2015 12:25:00 AM
Really a "dream cloud" Liam. Love Best wishes of 2015.>rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/4/2015 3:47:00 AM
it sure is rajat sails away to that special place smiling i pray you have a great year
Date: 1/3/2015 12:47:00 AM
a most lovely romantic poem Liam mate hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/4/2015 2:09:00 AM
linda dear pal smiling thank you for the wonderful comment bless you
Date: 1/3/2015 12:01:00 AM
Very very beautiful, I want to join this mile high club too!!!!!! :) :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/4/2015 2:05:00 AM
ha ha arthur i am in front of you in the queue lol wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated pal
Date: 1/2/2015 7:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work this evening. I have not and probably will never join the 'mile high club' ;) I don't think I could be quiet enough? Light & Love
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/4/2015 2:00:00 AM
smiling i was dreaming in the clouds thank you kindly debbie for the wonderful comment bless you dear pal
Date: 1/2/2015 6:43:00 PM
Liam my friend this is one beautiful poem, I found it very magical and as I was reading all these little pictures come into my mind and what beautiful pictures they were, you are a story teller and a good one at that, happy new year and take care..............Vera.............
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/4/2015 1:55:00 AM
smiling vera your a pal wishing you and peter the happiest year ever
Date: 1/2/2015 7:04:00 AM
Liam, I just love how your poems are always full of light and pure passion! This one is lovely!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 8:48:00 AM
i just paint in the happiness held in the heart meg thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/2/2015 7:04:00 AM
Hi Liam ! Very dreamy and magical poem about Love Hopes and Dreams ! Another very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend. Just awesome! A very solid 7 +++ for you ! A very dazzling and romantic poem to be held so very close to ones heart. Smiling. I really enjoy it! Love it! You're pen is truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year and yours! And I do pray that all your dreams and hopes come for you true in 2015! Have a very wonderful day!God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 8:46:00 AM
thank you dorian for the truly beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 1/2/2015 4:57:00 AM
- A simple recipe for life: a dash dreams and a great cup true love ...... a beautiful dream poem, dear Liam (7) - Over the rainbow .... the sky is always blue :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 8:44:00 AM
thank you anne lise dear pal almost felt your words skipping over powerful vision painted over the rainbow bless you

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