A Dream

I lay peacefully Dreaming But dreams Turn to nightmares I toss I turn Losing my grip on reality I am alone Where is the world? My eyes open I am relieved of the nightmare Only to find That the loneliness continued I am alone All Alone

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2013 8:12:00 PM

Sophie., Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

Daver Austin

Date: 4/17/2013 12:03:00 PM

Caught between the rock and the hard place. Sympathy. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:53:00 PM

Sophie. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2013 10:17:00 AM

Sophie, thank you for your fine poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 4/12/2013 4:38:00 PM

Very nice piece.