A Dream

I had a dream about you; I wish it would come true
I told you it was over, but still I’m not over you 
You told me that you loved me
That it would be alright
You told me I was beautiful 
The way I looked that night
We danced under the stars
We swam in the moonlit lake
But when you kissed my lips
I suddenly awake
The feeling I am left with is a little bittersweet
Because when I’m without you
I’m simply incomplete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 3:16 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jenna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Frew Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Very good, I like it!
Murphy Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 3:06 PM
NICE WRITE ENJOYED IT AND ALSO WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP FALESHIA
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Great romantic write with a surprise ending...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:41 PM
enjoyed reading
Bathsheba Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Perfect rhyme Jenna - i like this write - Thanks for sharing -:)
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