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A Dream

I had a dream about you; I wish it would come true I told you it was over, but still I’m not over you You told me that you loved me That it would be alright You told me I was beautiful The way I looked that night We danced under the stars We swam in the moonlit lake But when you kissed my lips I suddenly awake The feeling I am left with is a little bittersweet Because when I’m without you I’m simply incomplete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2010 3:16:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jenna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:34:00 PM
Very good, I like it!
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Date: 3/18/2010 3:06:00 PM
NICE WRITE ENJOYED IT AND ALSO WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP FALESHIA
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:55:00 PM
Great romantic write with a surprise ending...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:41:00 PM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:40:00 PM
Perfect rhyme Jenna - i like this write - Thanks for sharing -:)
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