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A Downpour of Torrential Rain

A downpour of torrential rain is all I see out my sill so clear with dark intensified- I see the thrashing from lightning on my willow tree, as this thunderstorm is a cyclone personified. I can sense the squall through my veins, feel the resonating vibrations of hail on my roof- Soon only devastating destruction remains, I am astounded by the clouds; stoic and aloof. The temperatures rise and fall without warning, August shouldn’t be this cold during the day- I know I shall awake tomorrow morning to damages on my lawn and down by the bay. The staggering rage of mother nature has begun, a tempest in the worst possible degree- I long for the moment I can see the western sun, a downpour of torrential rain is all I see. February 25, 2018

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Date: 3/23/2018 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Luloo - keep up the great work! :-) <3
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Date: 3/21/2018 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. You made me float on torrential rain.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:14:00 PM
Wow! I can feel the fear! We have tornado threats today! Eeks Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2018 11:11:00 AM
Great imagery Laura, congrats :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Laura.
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:47:00 AM
Very descriptive WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 3/5/2018 8:21:00 AM
A sweeping read! Bravo! xomo
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Date: 3/5/2018 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a well received win Laura! This had to be a challenge to accomplish. Bravo! : )
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Laura !! And what an interesting image you presented with your poem. (*Looks like lightning people walking on earth !)
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:00:00 PM
So well-written without the sense of sound, Laura! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:39:00 PM
Congratulatiions, Laura, on your fine win in the contest.
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Laura. Well done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/4/2018 10:11:00 AM
thank you lovely Line ;)-luloo
Date: 2/25/2018 11:37:00 AM
Wow...well written and descriptive without mentioning the sound of thunder. This will do very well in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/26/2018 8:01:00 AM
thank you sweet Rhoda ;)-luloo

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