A Downpour of Torrential Rain

A downpour of torrential rain is all I see
          out my sill so clear with dark intensified-
I see the thrashing from lightning on my willow tree, 
  as this thunderstorm is a cyclone personified. 

         I can sense the squall through my veins, 
feel the resonating vibrations of hail on my roof-
   Soon only devastating destruction remains,
I am astounded by the clouds; stoic and aloof.

      The temperatures rise and fall without warning, 
August shouldn’t be this cold during the day-
I know I shall awake tomorrow morning
         to damages on my lawn and down by the bay. 

      The staggering rage of mother nature has begun, 
a tempest in the worst possible degree-
  I long for the moment I can see the western sun, 
             a downpour of torrential rain is all I see. 


February 25, 2018
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Barden Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Luloo - keep up the great work! :-) <3
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. You made me float on torrential rain.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Wow! I can feel the fear! We have tornado threats today! Eeks Congrats!
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Great imagery Laura, congrats :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Congrats on your top win, Laura.
Canerdy Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Very descriptive WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:21 AM
A sweeping read! Bravo! xomo
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 4:14 AM
Congratulations on a well received win Laura! This had to be a challenge to accomplish. Bravo! : )
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Laura !! And what an interesting image you presented with your poem. (*Looks like lightning people walking on earth !)
Haight Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:00 PM
So well-written without the sense of sound, Laura! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Tripp Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Congratulatiions, Laura, on your fine win in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Laura. Well done.
Scars Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:11 AM
thank you lovely Line ;)-luloo
Tripp Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Wow...well written and descriptive without mentioning the sound of thunder. This will do very well in the contest.
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 8:01 AM
thank you sweet Rhoda ;)-luloo
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