William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

A Doves Nest

white dove high atop
brown grass and an orange string~~
young cackling chicks wait

2022 August 12
*3rd Place*
Nature Themed Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 August 22

*HMS; 5,7,5.

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Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2022 at 1:33 PM Nice description, William and congrats for your win. William Kelii Kekaula August 25, 2022 at 2:00 PM Thanks, Andrea; thorough means letting go my friend, Aloha~William

Charles Messina August 24, 2022 at 2:42 AM Aloha, William. Excellent haiku my friend. Congrats on your winning placement! Well done...Charlie William Kelii Kekaula August 24, 2022 at 4:27 AM Charlie, ah, the welcome of sore eyes, thanks my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith August 22, 2022 at 1:27 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......... William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thanks, Paula, great/blessed day to you too, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex August 22, 2022 at 7:56 AM Wonderful scene. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2022 at 8:11 AM Thanks, Christuraj, my friend, Aloha~William

Tania Kitchin August 22, 2022 at 5:22 AM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! William Kelii Kekaula August 22, 2022 at 5:28 AM Thanks, Tania, sweet, Aloha~William

Valsa George August 13, 2022 at 7:55 PM A sweet haiku, vibrant with fresh life. All the best in the contest.... dear William ! William Kelii Kekaula August 13, 2022 at 8:12 PM In my lifetime, Valsa, many nests, but it's common that manmade articles make up some of them, only when they're away from man, perhaps it'll be all-natural, Aloha~William

Darlene De Beaulieu August 12, 2022 at 4:16 PM Hello Lassad, Dove's is my fav. bird. I enjoy listening to their song in the early morning. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu August 13, 2022 at 11:23 AM Hello William, Sorry Okay Hilo Poet it will be. I got the name wrong again. Yes they are beautiful birds. Thank you William. Aloha! Darlene William Kelii Kekaula August 12, 2022 at 4:54 PM They are beautiful birds, Darlene. I agree wholeheartedly, and it is I, William, Hilo Poet; it's OK, my friend, Aloha~William.