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A Doves Nest

white dove high atop
brown grass and an orange string~~
young cackling chicks wait

2022 August 12
*3rd Place*
Nature Themed Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 August 22

*HMS; 5,7,5.

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2022 1:33:00 PM Nice description, William and congrats for your win. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/25/2022 2:00:00 PM Thanks, Andrea; thorough means letting go my friend, Aloha~William

Charles Messina Date: 8/24/2022 2:42:00 AM Aloha, William. Excellent haiku my friend. Congrats on your winning placement! Well done...Charlie Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/24/2022 4:27:00 AM Charlie, ah, the welcome of sore eyes, thanks my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/22/2022 1:27:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......... Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/22/2022 1:44:00 PM Thanks, Paula, great/blessed day to you too, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex Date: 8/22/2022 7:56:00 AM Wonderful scene. Congratulations! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/22/2022 8:11:00 AM Thanks, Christuraj, my friend, Aloha~William

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/22/2022 5:22:00 AM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/22/2022 5:28:00 AM Thanks, Tania, sweet, Aloha~William

Valsa George Date: 8/13/2022 7:55:00 PM A sweet haiku, vibrant with fresh life. All the best in the contest.... dear William ! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/13/2022 8:12:00 PM In my lifetime, Valsa, many nests, but it's common that manmade articles make up some of them, only when they're away from man, perhaps it'll be all-natural, Aloha~William

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/12/2022 4:16:00 PM Hello Lassad, Dove's is my fav. bird. I enjoy listening to their song in the early morning. Enjoy your evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/13/2022 11:23:00 AM Hello William, Sorry Okay Hilo Poet it will be. I got the name wrong again. Yes they are beautiful birds. Thank you William. Aloha! Darlene Hilo Poet Date: 8/12/2022 4:54:00 PM They are beautiful birds, Darlene. I agree wholeheartedly, and it is I, William, Hilo Poet; it's OK, my friend, Aloha~William.