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For Only March 2025 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

as my dog and i were on a walk he said we have to have a talk about the way we are constructed it was then that he instructed when you say top to bottom about things that we've both got 'em what you mean is front to back i'll admit i was taken aback. he said just as night follows day when you open your mouth to say back to front in a kind of flip-flop what you mean is bottom to top he barked i believe our walk's complete can i now have my doggy treat

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Date: 3/10/2025 5:34:00 PM
So delighted to see your winning work on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. I think that dog has it all figured out. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 3/10/2025 10:46:00 PM
Thanks, Sara! I think so, he's smarter than me!
Date: 3/7/2025 1:04:00 PM
Well, at least he didn't ask how we got here
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David Crandall
Date: 3/7/2025 1:41:00 PM
lol - true!

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