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A Divine Stream Flows

a divine stream flows rippling an aura of love.... sacred dip awaits © kashinath karmakar (1st July 2011) ========================== Placement: 2nd ;(July 2011) Contest:Precept:Nature's Haiku (Photo based) Sponsor:John Freeman

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/12/2011 4:04:00 PM

congrats on your big win in the contest, some beautiful words...

Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/10/2011 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations Kashinath!!! This is beautiful anyway it's read.., however I seems to sense a Freudian under tone; which I do appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 11:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:15:00 PM

swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 7:25:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS! on the big placement or I can on your triumphant win....well-said write..*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 4:03:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty my friend.. superb selection of words for wonderful second place luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/9/2011 10:44:00 AM

So very lovely...congrats on your big win. BG

Vivek Deshpande

Date: 7/9/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations to you also

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:02:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of john, kashinath

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:45:00 AM

Many congrats, Kash : )

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 8:45:00 AM

Kashinath, Awesome precept of life. Great to see your poem near the top of the list. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 12:15:00 PM

Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Kashinath. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2011 11:27:00 AM

Very beautiful take on the image, Kashinath-- I really like that 2nd line you have here-- very vivid in my opinion and has that sense of serenity about it as well-- wish you the best in the contest :D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/3/2011 5:40:00 AM

How I would love to take a dip with you, Kash. Lovely haiku -- perhaps an entry for "A River Runs through It?" If so, winning wishes for you. Am headed to Key Biscayne today to spend time with my sister. Hope you'll check out my new contest on Unsolved Mysteries. Take your time. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Vivek Deshpande

Date: 7/3/2011 12:38:00 AM

Thank you so much......! Nicely delineated... I really like it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2011 5:00:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck..Very descriptive of God's Divine Forgiveness and Redeeming Power..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 2:05:00 PM

wow, Kash, I think you did splendidly well with this one. Gosh I wish I had thought of it. I think the best i"ve seen yet!! YEs, there is no way to do this kind of haiku without using symbols or personification or something, but I think this kind of haiku is rather fun to read! (whether the modernists find it acceptable or not!!) LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/2/2011 10:58:00 AM

Stunning imagery Kash, really love your last line here :-)

James Foulk

Date: 7/2/2011 10:07:00 AM

loved this beautiful Haiku. thank you for commenting on Rain Finally Came.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2011 6:26:00 AM

oh this is sheer beauty Kashinath.. sacred dip awaits..how precious..baptism in the spirit in the pool of life..good luck in John Moses's contest with this amazing piece luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 4:12:00 AM

john will love this as i do kashi... incredible!! winning wishes.. come visit! ;) huggs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/1/2011 2:49:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Kash

John Rhinem

Date: 7/1/2011 2:40:00 PM

Ps. Smile ~ “I Believe That I Shall Fave `This Jewel; Tis Very Beautiful!`”:) ~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2011 2:38:00 PM

You refreshed my memories , kashinath