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A Divine Stream Flows

a divine stream flows
rippling an aura of love....
sacred dip awaits




© kashinath karmakar (1st July 2011)
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Placement: 2nd ;(July 2011)

Contest:Precept:Nature's Haiku (Photo based)

Sponsor:John Freeman

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Charlotte Puddifoot

July 12, 2011 at 4:04 PM

congrats on your big win in the contest, some beautiful words...

Edwin Baldwin

July 10, 2011 at 1:02 PM

Congratulations Kashinath!!! This is beautiful anyway it's read.., however I seems to sense a Freudian under tone; which I do appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

July 10, 2011 at 11:31 AM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Nette Onclaud

July 9, 2011 at 10:15 PM

swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

July 9, 2011 at 7:25 PM

CONGRATULATIONS! on the big placement or I can on your triumphant win....well-said write..*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 9, 2011 at 4:03 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty my friend.. superb selection of words for wonderful second place luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 9, 2011 at 12:05 PM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

July 9, 2011 at 10:44 AM

So very lovely...congrats on your big win. BG

Vivek Deshpande

July 9, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Congratulations to you also

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 9, 2011 at 9:02 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of john, kashinath

Jack Horne

July 9, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Many congrats, Kash : )

John Freeman

July 9, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Kashinath, Awesome precept of life. Great to see your poem near the top of the list. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 5, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Kashinath. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 3, 2011 at 11:27 AM

Very beautiful take on the image, Kashinath-- I really like that 2nd line you have here-- very vivid in my opinion and has that sense of serenity about it as well-- wish you the best in the contest :D

Carolyn Devonshire

July 3, 2011 at 5:40 AM

How I would love to take a dip with you, Kash. Lovely haiku -- perhaps an entry for "A River Runs through It?" If so, winning wishes for you. Am headed to Key Biscayne today to spend time with my sister. Hope you'll check out my new contest on Unsolved Mysteries. Take your time. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Vivek Deshpande

July 3, 2011 at 12:38 AM

Thank you so much......! Nicely delineated... I really like it.

Sara Kendrick

July 2, 2011 at 5:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck..Very descriptive of God's Divine Forgiveness and Redeeming Power..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2011 at 2:05 PM

wow, Kash, I think you did splendidly well with this one. Gosh I wish I had thought of it. I think the best i"ve seen yet!! YEs, there is no way to do this kind of haiku without using symbols or personification or something, but I think this kind of haiku is rather fun to read! (whether the modernists find it acceptable or not!!) LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

July 2, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Stunning imagery Kash, really love your last line here :-)

James Foulk

July 2, 2011 at 10:07 AM

loved this beautiful Haiku. thank you for commenting on Rain Finally Came.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 2, 2011 at 6:26 AM

oh this is sheer beauty Kashinath.. sacred dip awaits..how precious..baptism in the spirit in the pool of life..good luck in John Moses's contest with this amazing piece luv..