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A Divine Comedy To Breakup

Through Hell you were my guide, Through Purgatory you were my healer, Through The Heavens you held me, From the highest you brought me down, my broken wings and fear withhold me, The wind carries me like a butterfly through a storm, Carrying me to unthinkable places, I fill my heart with dirt, while you used to fill it with gold, i walk the lonely path, for even my shadow left me in darkness, i live on the streets of broken dreams and wishes, I knock at the door of my dark friend, he gives me relief... Bloody and dizzy I stay at the door, the cuts grow and the pain leaves, He opens a window and gives me a necklace of rope..... Should i accept it?

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Date: 3/19/2024 3:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/12/2017 7:52:00 AM
Hello Gerardo this is an unusual poem,you have written. My thought is no he should not take the rope. That does not solve the problem. Nice to meet you my friend.
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