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Glist'ing drops
Splashing into fine mist—
I become one with the waterfall.

Feeling joy
As droplets kiss my face
And enter my soul’s most sacred place.

Crystalline,
Anointing me with love,
Sustaining all life forms on the Earth.

Gratitude
For each divine droplet;
A cascading veil of purity.

© Connie Marcum Wong

Contest: Some Form of Crystalline sponsored by Nette Onclaud
November 3, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/16/2014 7:27:00 PM
You have mastered both imagery and a feeling of serenity with this one, Connie!.. Beautiful!! Hugs.. Arlene
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/16/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Arlene. When I think of crystal clear water, I think of all those who don't have clean water to drink and that is what inspired this poem. I am so grateful to have clean water to drink. Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/8/2014 2:54:00 PM
You have enchanted me with this divine poem, Connie! It merits not only a top rating but also a fave!! Your waterfall glistens with joy, gratitude and peace of mind! Congratulations on being a most worthy winner! // paul
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:09:00 PM
Wow! What a lovely comment Paul. It means a lot to me whenever anyone fave's a poem of mine. Thank you so much! hugs, Connie
Date: 11/8/2014 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Connie. Your poem is beautiful.
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:08:00 PM
Oh, thank you Brenda. I appreciate your sweet comment. Mahalo, Connie
Date: 11/8/2014 4:25:00 AM
Just beautiful verse, Connie, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram. I am still getting to my comments I need to make. Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/7/2014 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Connie
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph!
Date: 11/7/2014 1:57:00 AM
and you mystify me with this divinely composed piece, connie..thank you for being part of my contest and biggie congrats!
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for my high placement in your contest Nette. I am happy it inspired me to write this poem. You certainly had some really wonderful entries that must have been difficult to choose.
Date: 11/6/2014 9:54:00 PM
Look, Connie, you are in top three placements (well there are around 8 of us) BIG congrats. YAYYYY for this gem.
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Nette's contest was inspiring. Love your entry!
Date: 11/6/2014 9:23:00 PM
Totally enamored by the sense of peace that flows through this poem. You have taken me there with you into the waterfall and I share now my gratitude for the joy it fills me with. Thank you and congratulations !!
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:43:00 PM
What a beautiful comment you have gifted me with Debra. Thank you so much!
Date: 11/6/2014 7:28:00 PM
Congrad's Connie a lovely combination of words, faith & art. Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Debbie. Nette's contest was inspiring.
Date: 11/6/2014 3:23:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Connie:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. There were some really beautiful entries.
Date: 11/6/2014 3:19:00 PM
This is just so beautiful Connie. I was so happy to see you so high on the list. I cheered out loud. Lucky I am by myself. They might of carted me away other wise. I am going to fav this gem, Congratulations on your fine win. YEAH!!!!
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:51:00 PM
Dear Maurice, you have made my day by liking my poem enough to want to fav. it. Thank you so much my friend. Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/5/2014 8:19:00 AM
It's paradise. Cascade of bliss. Grand. Simple. Honest. Pure. Your poem is the product of a blessed heart. Love Connie....rajat
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:53:00 PM
What a very lovely compliment you pay me Rajat. How kind of you. I truly appreciate your sincere words. Thank you so much! Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/3/2014 3:33:00 PM
Connie, the way you wrote yours says so much about who you are as a person and your belief system.That is what I enjoy about seeing these poems in Nette's contest. They tell so much about us. GREAT poetry!!
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Date: 11/3/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...I loved yours. You know how much I adore rain as it purifies the Earth. I enjoyed writing about a waterfall. hugs, Connie
Date: 11/3/2014 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful words to a beautiful image, it doesn't get better than that. Sure to be a winner Connie, James :)
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Date: 11/3/2014 3:42:00 PM
Thank you very much James for your lovely comment. I adore rain and waterfalls and any kind of elements made of water. Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/3/2014 11:44:00 AM
wonderful imagery I found this most uplifting Connie:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/3/2014 12:02:00 PM
Oh thank you Jan. I am playing catch up with poetry. I appreciate your comment. Blessings, Connie