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A ditty to my titty

A ditty to my titty There you are upon my chest You used to be the boob I loved best But now all you do is cause me grief I just need a moments relief But you would rather swell and cause me pain Make my skin itch again and again This journey so far , has been too long I’m starting to think we don’t belong To add insult to injury there’s a wound that won’t heal I’m forced to wear dressings-I’m sick of this deal! This wound has ruined nearly all of my bras I think this issue has gone too far!! Now my skin is attacking me Itch itch scratch scratch please just let me be!! So here it is- a ditty to my titty I beg you please- stop being so ty

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William Rodriguez

Date: 8/20/2024 2:36:00 PM

Very expressive and exclamatory. Simple and with mountainous intrigue. (Not like that of course.) Intrigue in your poetic prowess. Great work, inspiring.

Karen Jones

Date: 7/25/2024 4:48:00 PM

Attacking your pain with a sense of humor is healthy! I giggled at the title which drew me in but then felt compassion for you. Hope you find relief. Hugs

clare barclay
Date: 7/25/2024 8:53:00 PM

I’m glad you like the titty title :) all is well, kind of used to the blooming boob issue these days! Take care

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2024 3:32:00 PM

I hope you get the issue sorted but your poem made me smile and I love the title, I too try and face such things with humour especially having mammograms when i've had lumps! write on Clare:-) hugs Jan xx

clare barclay
Date: 7/25/2024 8:52:00 PM

I’m sorry to hear that is he ok? Are you ok? Wow 3500!! That’s amazing.what is your book called?( please tell me it’s ‘ naughty poopy!)xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2024 3:44:00 PM

yeah Im fine - hubby has had cancer which actually was the catalyst to me beginning to write poetry for the first time - ten years on about 3500 poems , i published a humour book last year - naughty poopy farty risque type poem and am working on a second one - we need more humour in our lives. hugs jan xx

clare barclay
Date: 7/25/2024 3:40:00 PM

We have to laugh as sometimes we would cry! Lumps just riddle you with dark thoughts don’t they ? Hope you are ok. It’s a lifelong issue which will flare up from time to time. Glad it made you smile!xx