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'a Distant Recall'

her heart now scattered
picture perfect memories 
a distant recall
clinging to familiar things
in pursuit of what makes sense




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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 7:15:00 AM

It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Wilma. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/7/2011 10:21:00 PM

Good one Wilma..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/7/2011 3:50:00 PM

Hi Wilma, all sounds familiar somehow and natural too....... but as far as the last line .... good luck girl ...pickins are gettin' mighty slim! : ) God bless

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/7/2011 1:08:00 PM

Sounds like a book of my life... Your insight into your own soul is a precious gift that most are not able to see... Your an Angel in my eyes for now till """"""""...... always a hug and kiss, love Michael....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2011 10:36:00 PM

wilma, this sounds like you are describing alzheimers. Did i get it right?? (well, now that I think about it, it could also be someone simply with a broken heart!) In any event, very nice, Wilma.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/6/2011 6:30:00 PM

A profound write, homegirl. Lovely and apt title, not to mention the contents. I like this muuuuchly. Hugs, Licia. xxx

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/6/2011 5:37:00 PM

Wow what a short touching write. Reads like a screenplay. A splendid piece indeed.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/6/2011 2:36:00 PM

Very deep and creative meaningful expressions, Wilma

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/6/2011 1:34:00 PM

Quite deep. Slightly veiled and yet so vivid! Excellent!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2011 1:26:00 PM

Reminds me of an elderly woman who has Alzheimer's, Wilma. She stays close to things that are "familiar" and "make sense," but sometimes rambles on about memories from youth. The stories seem to change all the time. Surely, this could be a poem about a lost love -- it just touched me in another way. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels
Date: 7/6/2011 1:30:00 PM

Carolyn, I love your interpretation of it.. love, Wilma

Paul Beadnall

Date: 7/6/2011 1:02:00 PM

LOVE IT . And thanx for the kind comment and marking .. bless up

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2011 12:24:00 PM

luv never seems to make sense Wilma especially to us women.. lovely lines capture the emotion luv.. beautiful...

James Peranteau

Date: 7/6/2011 12:00:00 PM

Awesome write dear poet! I so much love these terse writes Wilma, especially when the hold such feeling, I really enjoyed this write ! Have a blessed week...much love, james