Chetta Achara Poet Free verse

A Disagreement With Rumi

"...if you are too careful love will not find you." ~Rumi

If you are not careful
Love will find you,

Like fire finds a tinder.


For: BITE SIZE POEM no24 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
October 21, 2021

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Paulette Calasibetta October 28, 2021 at 9:43 AM Chetta, a powerful and beautifully written piece~ Blessings, Paulette

Christuraj Alex October 27, 2021 at 11:20 AM Such a beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman October 27, 2021 at 10:18 AM I do believe love finds you and changes your world. Congratulations on your win Chetta!

Krish Radhakrishna October 27, 2021 at 8:32 AM Congrats on your win. Nice modification of the Rumi poem!!

Line Gauthier October 27, 2021 at 7:56 AM charming poem ~