A Disagreement

A n attempt to bamboozle him.

D irecting  the abomination
I nto my inner soul.
S corn, in the flame of passion,
A ffection going nowhere.
G iving way to struggle, looking for a
R eason to cherish
E very yearning.
E nding this bitter taste,
M aking this relationship
E stranged.
N ever will it bloom 
T o a tender love.

© Hazel

For Delilah Ventura's Dictionary Fun Comp.
19/11/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations ...Seren
Connelly Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Seren . :-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Hazel love xx
Connelly Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Mandy. :-)
Tsiluma Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:07 AM
WHoa! This is cleverly done Hazel! Congrats on your win!
Connelly Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Thank you Vicky. :-)
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 3:30 PM
A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Connelly Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.. :-)
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December 9, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Hazel... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
Connelly Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Thank youPD :-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 8:14 AM
very clever xx
Connelly Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Mandy. :-)
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 1:32 PM
Lovely written Hazel, a little sad. - Wish you luck in the contest. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Connelly Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.. :-)
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