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A Dilemma

Just let me live my life my way To drink, dance, cheat or lie, You are welcome to join, if you may, I'll feast and frolic, least worried to die Drinking wine, whiskey, rum and rye. But if I do good deeds and pray, Will you guarantee heaven when I die? I'll be honest and take a straight way On the words of the Lord I'll rely; Will I then in Paradise blissfully lie?

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Date: 7/7/2014 12:20:00 PM
thank you for the reply on my comment
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Date: 7/4/2014 4:11:00 PM
Ah! this is an enjoyable write, Abdul! Quite a dilemma, too! But eventually it is good sense that prevails. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2014 9:00:00 AM
Define good sense?! That's the dilemma!!!!! Thanks for your comments.
Date: 7/4/2014 11:09:00 AM
wow..congrats and thanks for sharing - CT
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2014 9:04:00 AM
Glad you liked it.
Date: 7/4/2014 9:57:00 AM
Abdul, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2014 9:05:00 AM
Thanks for your comments.
Date: 7/4/2014 8:23:00 AM
A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/7/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thanks.

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