A Difficult Journey

Feel the dust settle,
on a difficult journey;
I'll finally rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fraser Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Journeys are nice Abe, but reaching one's destination is bliss>>James
Carr Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 10:55 AM
i absolutly loved this one.keep it up!!!**...raven
Mayall Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 10:49 AM
loved it
Kittrell Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 9:51 AM
Love it mucho mas
Kittrell Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 9:49 AM
Beautiful poem! You rock Mr. L!
Neal Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 1:37 AM
Nice poem, thanks for your comments. DN
Moreno Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:48 PM
It is amazing when the dust does settle from our busy lives that we can find rest. Clever senryu.............Raul
Winter Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:47 PM
Hope you get a good rest. Wishing you and yours a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:32 PM
Well done...you have written this with perfection. ........Carrie
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace