Jan Allison Poet Verse

A Different Style of Carriage

Perfect posture 
Your back is straight 
Elegant gait 
Beauty will shine 

Don’t ever slouch 
Align your spine 
God’s own design 
Classy chassis 

Jan Allison
4th August 2014

Written for RIDE ON A PATHYA VA Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
~Awarded 1st place~

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Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2014 at 6:21 PM wow, a great win for a GREAT poem. You did superbly, dear. Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 6:23 PM Thank you so much Andrea for the amazing comment:-) hugs Jan xxx

Early Jae August 11, 2014 at 4:54 PM This is awesomely unique! Def deserving of 1st place!! Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 4:55 PM Thank you so much Nette wanted to think out of the box - so I did :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 4:17 PM Yay!! Grats on your win!! I am so happy for you :) :) Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 4:34 PM I'm smiling like a Cheshire cat Casarah can't believe it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi August 11, 2014 at 2:54 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 3:00 PM Thanks very much Debbie:-) Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh August 11, 2014 at 6:18 AM Congratulations and I enjoyed your poem. God bless you. and Happy writing!!! Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 7:20 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Regina:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 5:33 AM Brilliant unique take Jan,, so u place at top my friend,, huge congrats! Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 5:48 AM Thanks Dr Sharma I am so delighted with my placement in Nette's contest - she always inspires me to try my best:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2014 at 10:39 AM i will never look at carriage the same way again, jan.. this is way out of the ball park!... thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats on your top spot.. huggs Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 12:21 PM You do encourage us to 'think outside the box' so i am delighted that I achieved this!!! Hugs Jan xxx

David Mohn August 10, 2014 at 9:49 AM Unique and clever...big congrats to you Jan Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:52 AM Thanks so much David - I tried to think outside the box on the theme of 'carriage' and I am so delighted we shared the top spot:-) Hugs jan xxx

Seren Roberts August 10, 2014 at 8:02 AM Well done Jan....Seren Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:09 AM Thanks Seren for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker August 10, 2014 at 7:10 AM Nicely done Jan... Congrats! 1st place win... Verlena Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:09 AM Thanks Verlena I am delighted:-) Hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani August 10, 2014 at 6:08 AM nice classy ride on the chariot and top win. congrats Jan. Mohan Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:08 AM Thanks Mohan for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith August 10, 2014 at 5:32 AM Wow Jan....congratulations on your top spot....hugs Tim Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 5:32 AM Oh I didn't realise the contest had been judged - thank you for your kind comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 5:21 AM Very unique write, Jan. congrats on the win Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 5:33 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment - I've yet to look at the winning list:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2014 at 11:42 AM thank you, jan... huggs Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 11:47 AM Ohh am glad it is poems with names on! Hope you enjoy this write Nette I do so love the challenges you set us! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 4, 2014 at 8:49 PM you are unique and I love it! good job ;) Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 11:46 AM Oh yes Casarah when God made Blunderwoman he broke the mold no cloning me LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton August 4, 2014 at 7:27 PM interesting form Jan a poem of beauty and depth gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 11:44 AM Thanks Shadow its my first attempt at this form - Nette always finds us great challenges! Hugs Jan

Vera Duggan August 4, 2014 at 7:04 PM Very well written Jan, thank goodness I didn't have to do that, like you I am a little shortie and pretty well formed, for an oldie anyway, but I was always small and thin, thank you for lovely read and good luck in the contest. Take care my friend..........Vera........... Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 11:41 AM Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment Vera:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith August 4, 2014 at 4:49 PM Well done Jan. Love the chassis line..wonderful...hugs Tim Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:50 PM LOL thanks for the comment Tim. I really struggled with this form Cas has done hers brilliantly! Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:18 PM Hoping they get the formatting issues sorted before the contest closes!

Frederic Parker August 4, 2014 at 4:17 PM a nice take on the theme, no books on the head please Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:19 PM LOL Frederic I am pleased I never had to do that! Hugs Jan xxx