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A Different Point of View

To once have a love and then throw it all away knowing she will never be replaced But I'm staying on shore not venturing in again keeping my mind focused on other things How can I find another just as sweet? But fearing the day she'll never come back Just keep looking straight past straight past because hey the heart is treacherous who can know it So I'll keep it to myself and not give it to another Even though I'm being pulled in many different directions but making sure my words and actions are in the right place

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Date: 7/13/2009 7:31:00 PM
GOING THRU THE SAME THING AT THE MOMENT AS EXPRESSED IN THESE LINES"So I'll keep it to myself and not give it to another Even though I'm being pulled in many different directions but making sure my words and actions are in the right place" So I'll keep it to myself and not give it to another Even though I'm being pulled in many different directions but making sure my words and actions are in the right place
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Date: 7/12/2009 7:09:00 PM
it looks to me like your fine poem has come to some intelligent conclusions! Corinne, well done! jim
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