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A Diet Ditty

No longer will l sin

Treat my temple like a bin

Shoving all and sundry in

So l will bear and grin

Take it on the chin

To be happy in my skin

Be healthy within

No more biscuits from the tin

Against the bulge l will win

Today l will begin 

To do and feel better!

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Emilia James

Date: 7/29/2024 12:37:00 PM

The diets in the bin, the biscuits are in my tin.. that works much better for me until the weight starts to creep up. So will save this as a good reminder. Emilia : )

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/1/2024 10:27:00 AM

Well, you appear to have more willpower than I, Deb. I always promise I'll start tomorrow. And one of these days I'm sure I will.

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 11:04:00 AM

Ha not doing it Jim well like you one of these days for sure!! Thanks….Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2024 10:01:00 PM

Can't abide a diet. My glucose is high. So, may die earlier. Who cares? We all have to go sometime!! Cuddles returned.

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 11:03:00 AM

Oh Victor….l think your daughter, grandson and all who love you would care my friend! Your friends at P.S care also….Cuddles….Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2024 2:30:00 PM

No more biscuits from the tin! Best of luck!

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 11:01:00 AM

Im not doing it Kim though l should hehe….just a fun ditty! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 10:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "A Diet Ditty" write. To a rabbits life with just veggies to eat. Oh My!!! Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 11:00:00 AM

Thankyou dear Paula….no rabbits life for me! Ha….Debx

Jay Narain

Date: 5/30/2024 9:59:00 AM

I wish I can do thet. The biscuits become sweet cookies here, hard to resit. I will try my best to resist the temptation. Very nice poem.

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 11:00:00 AM

Me too Jay! We have to keep trying ha! Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/30/2024 9:54:00 AM

I constantly try to keep my weight in line, though I am thin. I'm just kind of wondering, what kind of biscuits are in the bin? It makes me hungry. Lol.

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 10:59:00 AM

Anything that is available Hilda hehe!! Thanks…Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/30/2024 9:49:00 AM

Dear Deb, your wonderful poem is a delightfully witty ode to healthy living! The playful rhymes and determined tone make getting fit feel fun. From ditching the biscuit tin to winning against the bulge, you inspire me with humor. This energetic piece will have readers ready to "begin" their own journeys with a grin. A tasty treat for mind and body! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2024 10:58:00 AM

From your avatar Daniel it doesn't look like you carry weight but its a small photo haha!! Thanks my friend….Debx