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A Diamond In the Sand

a precious diamond ring waited for its rightful owner half buried in the sands of a beach. Many passed the ring but in the busy din of the evening it remained ignored! A message of love sparkled in darkness in the moonlight as waves after waves came to claim it. Clutching her heart she came searching for it and was joyously united with the moon as witness. in the dark beach sands glitter of diamond greets tender trembling hands Haibun poetry Prose 91 words Haiku 5,7,5

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/1/2021 4:09:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you with love, Gina

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/1/2021 4:32:00 AM

Thanks Gina. Kind regards Krish

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2021 3:48:00 PM

Lovely imagery krish, I remember finding a gent's signet ring on a beach on a school trip, i handed it in to the headmaster and never found out if he returned it to its rightful owner. hugs jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Jan! That was noble of you but often they are not united with the owner! But people lose expensive personal items at playgrounds and must be heart breaking!