A Devil of Your Creation

The little devil of your creation
Is vindictively seeking retaliation 
It's not just a moment of aberration
It's the result of years of desperation
It's the only logical ramification
Of the never-ending humiliation
Of the betrayal that smothered my dedication

Now I see it, you can't hide your trepidation
Your fear of the awaiting excruciation
I'm sorry I couldn't resist the temptation
To see on your face that look of frustration
I bet it exceeded your expectation
But you've always been my inspiration
And then again, I'm just a devil of your creation!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ditshwele Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:38 AM
see this Sarah the form is clearly monorhyme
Curl Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Yes! I love this, so much power in it!
Segal Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Great write, love Simone
Guzzi Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:43 PM
LOL lot of action! Good one. Light & Love
Chachere Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Your stle is amazing. i could feel the words in your poem here! i adore it! keep writing. -Always&Forever Lynette
Loveless Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 5:45 PM
i LOVE this
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Wow this is a great representation of vengance one giant poetic metaphor and i loved it i have felt this way towards alot of ppl in the past so i really understood it well. it is a great write!=)Jo
Pickett Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:00 AM
well written poem my friend... Keep em comin'.....:JP]
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