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A Deluge Coming

"a deluge coming" 7/20/11 there i stood, ….out in the rain umbrella full of holes perforated like a shower drain … the rain.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . …dripping down my face why bother, i would say …………………………………… so i stood while droplets glazed my face ,"where are you?" i would say as i slowly turned to clay . . .and felt the putty in my throat begin to weigh as the moisture stayed a stillness parged my voice there is a deluge coming, i would say …………………. ,"where are you?" just come . . . . . be my sun

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Date: 7/29/2011 7:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2011 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful write Ernest.. Congratulations to you ;)
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Date: 7/27/2011 7:38:00 PM
congrats ernest on your wonderful win with these lovely words of poetry luv..
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Moses "Best Shot" contest Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:56:00 PM
hey Ernest, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:24:00 PM
Ernest,Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:16:00 PM
My congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of John, earnest
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:03:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF TERESA!...this is an amazing work of poetry - Kyle
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