A Deluge Coming

"a deluge coming" 						7/20/11

there i stood,


….out in the rain

 umbrella full of holes
perforated like a shower drain

… the rain..
.  .  .    .     .      
.    .    .     .    
.    . . .   .     .   
. .  . .
. .  . .
.  . .   .     .     

…dripping down my face

why bother, i would say

……………………………………

so i stood


while droplets glazed my face

,"where are you?" 

i would say
as i slowly turned to clay
    
.       .    .and felt the putty in my throat
begin to weigh



as the moisture stayed

a stillness  parged my voice

there is a deluge coming,
i would say ………………….

,"where are you?" 
just come . . . . .

be my sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Neels Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Beautiful write Ernest.. Congratulations to you ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 7:38 PM
congrats ernest on your wonderful win with these lovely words of poetry luv..
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your win in Moses "Best Shot" contest Ernest. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 12:56 PM
hey Ernest, congrats on your win, David
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July 27, 2011 at 12:24 PM
Ernest,Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 12:16 PM
My congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of John, earnest
Carlson Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 1:03 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF TERESA!...this is an amazing work of poetry - Kyle
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