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A Delicate Treat

Her meringues make me water pristinely pure with elegance so sugary sweet offered up a special treat eyes fall out of focus as delicate swirls entice cobalt blue biding interpretations tantalized, lips licked a simple teasing and pleasing of the tongue nibbled, flavours seduce every taste savoured lapped, loved, and treasured making each morsel last never letting another precious moments pass

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Date: 12/10/2018 6:44:00 PM
You had me at meringues. I also really liked "delicate....cobalt blue biding" really nice alliteration. Love the write, great poem.
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Date: 12/10/2018 5:35:00 PM
Wow, love this, Tim.
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Date: 12/4/2018 1:50:00 PM
Those meringues seem to be not sugar free :).Enticingly beautiful...Fantastic post.
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Date: 12/4/2018 12:08:00 AM
Happy Birthday Tim!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/3/2018 1:48:00 AM
very sweet and sensual Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2018 12:41:00 AM
- "so sugary sweet" and lovely poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2018 8:59:00 PM
The way to a mans heart is through his stomach!!!! Lovely!
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Date: 12/2/2018 7:59:00 PM
Favorit pie G'ma made was Rhubarb Meringue, Tim...haven't tasted the same since...good poem!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/2/2018 8:23:00 PM
When I was younger a neighbor grew rhubarb, we used to sample it from time to time. I love the taste..thanks Jimbo

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